I noticed the rain starting to fall, light wet kisses of the sky drizzling down on the city. I loved the rain and would have like to stay out in it all night, but I needed to get home. Ma and Pa might get worried if I stayed out too late, even though I was a college kid. But I guess thats a perk of being in a close knit family. I picked up my bag and started the journey home, deciding to take a short cut through the Marina. |

Devious Comments
okay anyways: OH I REMEBER! the opening sentance/para sets up the style. you used alot of imagry, i like it.
I have six pages thus far...
And uh, no, I don't know what they say >.<
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Partners in crime - ~Red-Scorpion ~draco13 ~Himitsu-Kuri ~Slothan
IT RAINED TODAY?!
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Partners in crime - ~Red-Scorpion ~draco13 ~Himitsu-Kuri ~Slothan
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